Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Snippets and Shorter Stories in the Early Morning

I am so proud of myself. I woke up early so that I could post this before my classes start. I didn't want to make you wait any longer. The time change is still messing with my mind, making me think it is earlier or later than it is.  Ah, well. Here is Snippet and Shorter Stories number five.  Oh, and don't forget to vote!

Dark Tattoo

Witch they called her. Unholy. Demon. Sorceress. Necromancer. Evil.  Alanya hugged her body tighter causing the ink trees to rustle. She knew it was the ever-changing tattoos on her body that made people fear her. But, just because she had powers of darkness didn’t make her evil. Just because people could walk in the daytime didn’t make them good. Right?


Alanya stared at the huts of the village that scorned her. She longed to join their community and feel the love of another person. But she knew it would never be. Another tiny crack appeared on her blackened heart as she turned away. Alanya breathed deeply of the crisp, night air.  She could smell the sun rising and reluctantly trudged back to her empty home in the Onyx Forest.

She could hear the bats screeching above and feel the silent owls piercing the night with their luminous eyes. A hungry hedgehog crossed her path, searching for small bugs to eat.  She picked him up and stroked his short quills. A wolf howled in the distance and Alanya decided she wasn’t alone.  Not when she was surrounded by other night creatures like her. And they weren't evil either. The barest half-smile tugged at the corners of her lips as she placed the inquisitive hedgehog near a rotting log, full of insect life and crossed over the Coal River.

Monday, November 3, 2014

Back to the sea for Day Four of Snippets and Shorter Stories


This next one is another snippet that shows how depressing I apparently seem to be. Enjoy the pretty picture and day four of my writing journal! Again, any comments, feedback, stories, etc, will always be welcome.

The Lonely Journey

We made it! 3,000 miles of choking dust and scorching heat melted away as Roona launched himself into the salty, cerulean sea. He turned and trumpeted to his family to join him before he remembered what had happened. He was the only living thing he could see. The water gently lapped against his body, erasing his physical pains but couldn't reach the emotional ones.

Sunday, November 2, 2014

Snippets and Shorter Stories, Day Three Blows In

 Day Three is already here. I really enjoyed writing this one. The picture was beautiful and I hope you can feel the emotion in my writing. I woke up this morning and it is raining. It smells wonderful!


 Waves on the Sand

The sky thundered and blew above her; the sea raged and tossed before her. Only the gritty sand beneath her and the calm city behind her remained the same.  He was gone. He had decided he didn’t want to be her dad anymore so he’d packed his bags and left. Now all she had was her mother.  
     As the dark sea rolled and crashed onto the beach, Eva's tears made small puddles on the sand before they were absorbed into the unquenchable sand. The wind blew, filling the air with brine and fresh rain, and threatened to rip away her red and white umbrella.
     Hours passed.
     Finally, the storm abated leaving behind no sign it had ever been so violent. Taking a final deep breath, the storm inside of Eva forgave the man who should have been her bedrock. Turning from the calming sea, Eva felt a pull on her red dress to turn back.  
     She didn't.
One final angry wave swept across the smooth beach, wiping away Eva's footprints, before retreating back into the salty sea.

Saturday, November 1, 2014

'Snippets and Shorter Stories' Continues to Entertain


Day Two of my Snippets and Shorter Stories 30 day challenge. I'm sure you all had a wonderful Halloween with family and friends. Let me know if you enjoy any of these snippets and shorter stories. This next one is also slightly creepy...I'm starting to wonder what kind of person I am. Feel free to share this with any of your friends who like to write. The vast concept that is imagination speaks differently to us all. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Down in the Deep

Fluorescent shapes and
colors of blue, yellow, and
orange rise from the blackness,
ramming the small deep
sea pod. The two men
inside stare in shock and
disbelief at the crack in the
thick, protective glass.
The giant squid floats
level with the doomed
pod and stares at them
with deep blue and black
eyes, patiently waiting for
their inevitable deaths.
No sense wasting energy
with another attack.
The men breathe once more
and the pod crumples in
on itself, creating a small
tear between worlds.
Hundreds of the 
fluorescent,
alien creatures
squeeze
into our
world
and
search
for
their
next
meal.

Friday, October 31, 2014

The Beginning: Snippets and Shorter Stories

A while back, I created a Pinterest board where I could pin cool/interesting pictures to help me with inspiration for future stories.  Shortly after that, my sister, who liked my idea, created her own board to give me more inspiration. After they slowly gathered Internet dust, I decided to dust them off to help me in my never-ending quest of daily writing.
How, you ask? Well, let me tell you. First, I will pick a picture or random topic and, second, write at least one sentence (and no more than a page or two) on whatever comes to mind. Additionally, I’m hopeful that some of these shorter stories will evolve into larger ones and perhaps even novels!  
Ideally, this will accomplish several things for me.  One, I will develop the habit of writing everyday; because, even if I don't work on my novel, I will take 15 mins and write a snippet. Two, it will stretch my creativity muscle and strengthen my ability to think and imagine. Three, it will put me in the mind set to write as a type of exercise, as well as, encourage me to write further in my novel.  Four, it will be a fun way to dabble in many genres and lead to future novels and short stories.
I would love for you to join me if you feel so inclined. Everyday (for the next month), I am going to post a picture with my snippet or shorter story. Then you can post either your addition to my piece, your own story, or both! I would also appreciate feedback; what did you think? do you want more on a certain snippet? etc.

Here is my first one that I thought really worked with Halloween. Happy reading while you eat your well-deserved candy!

The Metal Heart

4:00 am. Four missed calls. Four tubes left to connect. I ignore my burning eyes, my aching back, and my scratched and frozen hands, as I painstakingly make sure everything is perfect. The cold metal bites my skin and four drops of blood fall, splattering across its' surface.  I connect the final tube, turn the pump on, and sit back in my chair. I wait, holding my breath. One minute. Two minutes. Three minutes. Four. Then the heart thumps to life, matching the rhythm of my own. After four months of long nights, I had finally finished it.
     My daughter, Mary, would live.
Mechanical Heart  #Anatomic #Art      Now my wife, Elizabeth, would understand why I couldn’t visit her in the hospital, and why I’d had to quit work. I’d needed to make Mary an unbreakable heart so that she could come home.  
     My phone vibrates and lights up, casting eerie shadows across the beating metal organ. I answer it, eager to tell Elizabeth that I have saved our daughters' life. “Frank, why didn’t you answer my phone calls? I’ve been trying for hours.” Her voice is scratchy and full of emotion.
     “I finished it.”
     “Finished what, Frank?”
     “Mary’s mechanical heart.”
     “You built her a heart?”
     “Yes, I did, and now, she can come home. Elizabeth?”
     There was a long pause. “Frank, she already is. Mary...she died four minutes ago. We are bringing her home for the funeral." Elizabeth takes a deep breath. "Before she died, I heard her whisper, ‘Daddy, why are you doing this to me?’ What is she talking about? What did you do, Frank? Does it have to do with that metal heart you said you’ve been building? Why won’t you answer...”
     The phone drops from my hands, smashing apart. And over my screams of horror and anguish I hear the steady thump-thump, thump-thump.

Thursday, March 27, 2014

The Making of a Story Writing Exercises

In the next writing book I am reading, The Making of a Story, by Alice LaPlante, at the end of every chapter she gives two writing exercises. I thought I would post the prompt and my own examples of my writing. Feel free to comment on what you liked or didn't like and try them out for yourself. If you are really proud of what you wrote, send it to me! I would love to read what you have written. Enjoy and keep writing!
Chapter 1: What Is This Thing Called Creative Writing?
Exercise 1:  "I Don't Know Why I Remember..."

Friday, March 14, 2014

Writing Advice and Inspiration: Cheat Sheet Part 12/12

Cheat Sheet for Writing and Revision

Writing Advice and Inspiration: The Business of Writing Part 11/12


CHAPTER 11
THE BUSINESS OF WRITING:  DRIVING YOURSELF NUTS FOR FUN AND PROFIT
By Corene Lemaitre

THE HOLY GRAIL OF PUBLICATION

As writing is hard work, your desire to profit from your efforts is understandable.  But if you want to make serious money, fiction is probably not the best way to go about it.  

Monday, March 10, 2014

Writing Advice and Inspiration: Revision Part 10/12

CHAPTER 10
REVISION:  REAL WRITERS REVISE
By Peter Selgin


FIRST DRAFTS


Before we decided how to revise, it helps to have something to revise, namely a first draft.  I've heard it said that a first draft should be written with the heart, whereas subsequent drafts must bring to bear that more critical organ, the brain.
It's okay if a first draft sucks;  it should suck; it's supposed to suck.  Be reckless, be shameless, be grossly irresponsible and self-indulgent, even, but get something down.
Remember: when writing first drafts you should not be editing.  There is a woman who owns a collections of hats and wears one while writing her first draft, and another hat when revising.
However inspired, first drafts can always stand improvement.  And while there may be nothing sentimental about revision, editing can be enjoyable.  With experience the fiction writer learns not only how to find and solve technical problems but that solving such problems in a manuscript can be as creative as writing first drafts.

Writing Advice and Inspiration: Theme Part 9/12

CHAPTER 9
THEME:  SO WHAT’S YOUR STORY REALLY ABOUT?
By Terry Bain


"What's your story about?"
"Find out."
Of course, I think I was confusing plot with what my story was "about."  He wasn't asking, What happens, but rather, What's the big picture?  Why should I care?  He wasn't just asking what the story was about plot wise but what was the story really about?